How To Write A Band Biog

Young Bowie, Mumbai techno, 13 year old Abigail Breslin

At this year’s Indie-Con a panel of experts discussed  How Do You Break an Act in 2017 – and the one thing they all agreed on was the importance of getting the “story” right. These were all people who help unknown artists become known for a living. The story doesn’t have to be boastful or elaborate – it can be one sentence long – but you do need to give listeners a bit of context, ie
– Here’s an early demo by David Bowie before he got famous
– This is the latest underground hit with clubgoers in Mumbai
– This song was written by a Scottish 13 year old in her bedroom and has had 50,000 plays on YouTube

The fact is, you’re not the only great band out there. Every week thousands of artists are vying for the attention of fans, managers, bookers, bloggers, journalists, record companies and radio stations. We’re spoilt for choice: so if you can’t be arsed to tell us what’s special / interesting / different / funny / loveable / unique about your particular group, we’ll click away in seconds to some other equally great artist who does.

The trouble is, writing stuff about ourselves is about as enjoyable as having teeth pulled – which is why so many artists shy away from it altogether. Time after time, year after year I’ve fallen in love with a new tune, earmarked it for airplay – then found the artist’s online pages contain no information whatsoever.

Profile page for Pygmy Thorax on Facebook The belief that “Our Music Speaks For Itself” is amazingly widespread. It’s also, 99 times out of 100, just plain wrong.

And – just for the record – a load of quotes from your old reviews isn’t a story. When blogging about you (or introducing your record on the radio) we can say something like “Pygmy Thorax are four student saxophonists from Dundee who met at a driving school” if you put that in your biog.  But we can’t say “And now: soaring guitar sounds and solid songwriting – Drowned In Sound”.

So when you’ve gone to the trouble of making a great record, why not figure out a great story to go with it. If you can’t think of a story, then a few basic facts will do at a pinch. Where are you based, how long have you been going, who plays what, how did you meet, why did you form, where are you from, how many tracks have you previously released, when and where are you next playing live… ?

That way we can at least tell listeners this is a first bedroom demo; or the lead track on your forthcoming EP; that it was on a car commercial in Latvia back in 2009; that the band are all still at school; or that you’re all retired jazz musicians…

Some bands imagine that  having “a story” means filling up your biog with pretentious descriptions of your “exceptional” or “outstanding” music. You’ll find  a few examples at the bottom of this page. But what’s the point ? We only need to click “play” and we can hear for ourselves how exceptional – or outstanding – your music actually is.

Steve Lawson

As interactivity guru Steve Lawson puts it: “don’t tell us how great you are – tell us how interesting you are.” Is one of you a bilingual Bengali bellydancer, a part-time piano tuner, or a forty-something Danish quantity surveyor? Are you collectively on a mission from God, plotting to end to capitalism as we know it – or just hoping to get rich, famous and laid as quickly as possible?

And remember “true” isn’t necessarily the same thing as “interesting”. So use full poetic license to rewrite your personal history if it makes a better story. Christopher Isherwood claimed that for artists “anything you choose to invent about yourself is part of your personal myth and therefore true”. I’m not sure if this works for US presidents, but we’ll let that pass.

Personally I’d much rather be told a load of entertaining lies than a series of dull, boring facts. So long as your early Bowie demo sounds great, who cares if it later turns out to have been made by that Scottish 13 year old after all ?

But of course, this is just one man’s biased opinion. As a radio DJ, anyonymous bands make my job harder, so of course I’m going to moan about it. And yes of course – staying anonymous early on in their careers worked extremely well for Burial, Alt-J, and Jungle among others.

But it’s also true that for every successful act who has made it by staying mysterious there are hundreds – or more likely thousands – of other bands who’ve also believed their music would speak for itself and who’ve sunk without trace.  So before  leaving the Description and Bio sections blank on your Facebook artist page and send your music out there to fend for itself, you’ve got to ask yourself: ‘Do I feel lucky?’

For what it’s worth, below are some of my favourite band biogs from over the years.

Black Daniel

“When it doesn’t have 5 or 4, Black Daniel has 3 members. They are brothers Luke and Lamik 2000 from London town and Craig Louis Higgins Jnr from New York via Cape Cod. Meeting for the first time in Manhattan through a friend on the dancefloor of a Lower East Side disco, they quickly discovered a mutual love of animal tranquilisers and long walks in the rain. Some would say forming a band seemed like the logical progression, but it took a tour of the States with the brothers masquerading as DJs – and CLH Jnr doing his own special brand of tour management before the inevitable finally happened. Sometimes something just feels right. This wasn’t one of those times but they did it anyway. From that moment on its been a series of Japanese stage invasions, cow bell solos, bloodied microphones, blow up dolls, leather pant experiments, Uncle Warren’s trumpet, wigs, wood nymphs and general good times all the way. Black Daniel will be coming to a theatre near you soon…”

“Athletes In Paris come from the Northeast & sing in an accent too broad for anyone outside a 50 mile radius of Sunderland to fully comprehend more than little soundbites. To the accidental tourist they are an indie band speaking in tongues. They have two drummers playing world beats and latin grooves and their idiosyncratic pop songs are punctuated with chanted gang-vocals and frantic muted guitar picking. It’s one big multicultural northern melting pot…”

“The B Of The Bang is a collective of human beings from Portsmouth who use guitars, loops, mandolins, white noise, xylophones, accordions, banjos, feedback, shouting and percussion to conjur up melodies for maladies in the 21st century. The B of the Bang exists in an age of copyists and bandwagon-jumpers, brigands, blaggards and ne’er do wells. Its sole purpose is to sound unlike anything else you’ve ever heard whilst sounding exactly like everything else you’d ever want to hear. The B of the Bang is really just the sound of 6 people slowly losing their grip on reality. The B of the Bang will cure gout. And tennis elbow. Thank you.”

“Folk symphonist, sinner songwriter & an evangelist for English eccentricity. Too naughty to follow his Father, Grandfather, Grandmother and Uncle into the clergy, The Reverend Simpkins set out in 2008 to take on the Devil on his home territory of Folk’n’Roll. With his 9-piece Colchester-based freak-beat orchestra The Phantom Notes, he recently released his second album, LIONS.”

“We live in the North York Moors
We have written loads of songs
Some of them have been played on BBC York and BBC Tees (Thanks Bob)
We’ve been played on BBC Radio One
We have played songs at loads of gigs
We’ve played some gigs with really good bands (see list below)
We’ve played some really good venues (see a list below)
Have a listen to our songs
Come to our gigs.
We sound like sharp rocks on a big hillside in the blue spring. We sound like a river speeding through a slow carved valley in summertime. We play like the heather on fire in the furious gales of autumn. We play like our songs will turn away the white winter. No one comes from where we come from.”

“The original sound of Ninja Folk from Hackney, London. Stories of ship-wrecks and shark-bites, blurry-eyed Hawaiian islands, post-apocalyptic hoe-downs and horse-races. it’s all there, like a Brothers Grimm collection written in a foreign language, with some of the pages stuck together.”

“London’s Raven Beats Crow consist of Liam, Sam, Robin and Jon. Their Club Raven events have seen them host gigs in locations as diverse as a reference library and a crypt. Attendees have grown used to coming face to face with red-eyed ravens, hypnotic visual effects and even a robot called Roland. If you see some smartly-dressed chaps with animal heads, that’ll be them. Or they could be the illuminated skeletons wandering about. Or the twee gentlemen that look like they’ve just stepped out of 1934… You never know what you’re going to get from these wide-eyed gents with feathers in their hair. Their new ‘Dark Matters’ EP is a brooding mix of pop sensibilities and electro-psychedelia, born of the dark side of Raven Beats Crow.”

“After the umpteenth bailiff letter landed on Scott Russell’s doormat, he knew it was time to sell up and move on. The last and hardest belonging to let go was his beloved 1960s Fender amp, which he very reluctantly sold to clear his council tax arrears and gas bill. While rattling around the house on his own, the sense of loss and heartache inspired him to write and record an album under the new moniker RUSTS.”

“What does it mean to be British? It may well be the double decker buses and Cricket that sum up this fair isle. Kitsch. Harmless. Boring. or… It could be the thug abroad… Flag tattooed to his teeth; won’t eat that foreign muck. or… It could be Moody Gowns – a band who are quintessentially British for all the right reasons. Brought together by one Nathan Moseley back in 2008, Moody Gowns are an abrasive bunch of art-poppers destined to steal the heart of every true music fan on the planet. Whether it’s about the bane of the bus driver and his refusal to smile, the struggle and strife of being the powerless newcomer in a tight-knit household or the grand scale of just about everything from sex and religion to money – Moody Gowns are a band with something worth saying. Whilst being one of around five bands on earth that can actually claim they sound like no one else, comparisons and relations can be drawn to the likes of: Divine Comedy, The Blockheads, Stanley Holloway, Talking Heads, Eels, The Fall and Mr Bungle.”

Spinal Tap

And here are a few hilariously awful artist biogs from the same period. To protect the guilty I’ve changed all the names using the incomparable

“Quick Stigma are born from a shared vision of creativity and a burning ambition. The organic synthesis of vocalist Ant’s folk influence, the art rock persuasion of Fizzy’s guitar playing, bassist Pete’s power pop background and drummer Vince’s ferocious rock style, grew into a unique, taut, furious sound. Live, Quick Stigma are undoubtedly an exciting band. This foursome has the ability to hold an audience spellbound with their impassioned and unabashed juxtaposition of melodic intricacy and heavy rock intensity, crafted perfectly into a carefully-weighted mixture of pop sensibility and art rock angularity that challenges the listener at every turn.”

“Defending Inch formed in 2010 and set out to write a set of huge anthemic indie tunes. Drawing on a rich song writing talent present between all five members, the band continue to focus their style in to well crafted, hook filled, venue filling music with huge towering bursts which take the listener on a dynamic audio journey. Recent highlights include a support slot for Tacky Godfather and being selected by indie legends Redemption Of Undercover to support them on their tour.”

“In 2008 Experimental Syphilis was born and with it newer and slower incantations. At its core, the music remained both dark and ecstatic and continues to be reminiscent of such diverse influences as Significant Vagabond, The German Powder, Lower Orion, Abroad Tribulation, Function Of Grunt and Sheer Salmon. The band channels a shadowy, minimalist psychedelia that unveils itself at its own pace through repetition and the resurrection of such classic themes as death, birth, rebirth, heartbreak, car accidents, organized crime and identity theft. Band members take turns singing the alternately narrative and mantra-like texts, pushing the music towards a shifting, droning, and heaving whole. Leech, Kosher, and Zucchini switch instruments both live and in the studio and write each others lyrics, allowing each instrument to speak with multiple voices and each voice to speak from the depths of multiple psyches.”

“In the wreckage of the almost non-existent Glasgow scene of 2010, Columbian born Obsidian Delivery formed Catapult Maiden. Lying somewhere between Cock Capacitor and Bright Slot, they blend indie, math and post-rock influences to create gracefully off kilter anti-anthems. Combining intricately heartfelt guitar reminiscent of Exhaust Of The Nation and their ilk, and seeped in dreamlike waves of synth, Catapult Maiden flow effortlessly from melodic shores to the peaks of noise that have made Fissure Of The Marmalade so iconic. Catapult Maiden are one of the hardest working bands in Scotland and have relentlessly gigged since they formed, they have also supported the likes of: Incoherent Cricket, Surrogate Deliver, Shot Fiesta, Animal Of Nutmeg, Willing Bonanza, Wannabee Temple, Origin Mold, Skinning Of The Glimmering + more.”

“In a world of female singers burning bright, where famous images assail us from all sides and a queue of imitators lines up knocking on the door desperate to be heard, a new voice is about to cut through that chorus. No fame-seeking stage school graduate nor some shrinking bedroom poet, Amy Pepper offers something richer, deeper and more exotic. Burning with charisma and dripping in personality, wickedly humorous and dark with passion this is a woman that beguiles and intrigues, cajoles and inspires; a vixen, a siren who has broken hearts and had her own heart broken. Unafraid of honesty and able to conjure melodies as easily as most of us breathe, she sings songs that are resonant with experience and her sensuous, breathy vocals speak of love, longing and desire over piano-led laments and beat-driven vignettes. With a number of recent live performances including Guide Overture’s ‘Beige Episode’ night honing her bewitching stage presence, 2012 is the year that Amy Pepper steps out of the shadows and devours your heart.”


  1. Great article, but I’ve gotta say, because it’s just so over the top, it’s the Amy Pepper Biog out of all this that most makes me say ‘I’ve got to hear it.’

  2. Tom Robinson

    Finding those substitute artist names on was the best fun I’ve had all week. Cock Capacitor, Animal Of Nutmeg and Willing Bonanza still crack me up, even now…

  3. I reckon Amys “burning charisma” and “dripping personality” has melted away…

  4. Read and updated biog (well, it’ll be updated tomorrow by techy friend at least – I’m useless lol)

    Mine wasn’t a million miles off, but this has made me see some flaws it had

    Cheers dude 🙂

  5. The name Experimental Syphilis had me breaking into a hell of laugh session. I see the main difference here between the good bio’s and the bad is a focus on weirdness/uniqueness for good bio’s and focus on coolness/awesomeness/best-band-ever (arrogant self-compliments). Although I’m sure I have many problems with my self-written bio (one being WAY too long) I definitely don’t make myself out to be the new Elvis like the latter bio’s. Now excuse me. I have that band name maker to go play with.

  6. Marcus Hoffman

    I hope Pygmy Thorax is a real band, am off to listen to Activated Zoo.

  7. Bolg Wrad

    It’s easy enough to find the real Amy Pepper, etc. just google a phrase from each biog. Unfortunately the bands in question, without exception, live down to expectations.

  8. Tom

    Just wanted to share another brilliantly over the top press release that came in this week. Once again all names have been changed to protect the guilty and, once again this is exactly how NOT to write a band biog…

    “Enigmatic musical collective COCONUT DUMP return with sophomore project in the shape of 3 track EP AVENGING BLENDER. Quirm-based trio Poppy Gondola, Trashy Asset and Sam Shenanigan deliver an intoxicating piece of work that builds on their unique sound, detailing intricate tapestries of influences including neo soul elements, left-of-centre pop sensibilities and eclectic bass mused together with a funk infused twist.

    Poppy Gondola’s rich and decadent vocals offer a sweet and soulful tone that flows over the top of multilayered synths, beats and melodic broodings. Sophisticated production and instrumentation boast how the band have continued to evolve within their own lane, avoiding them being led too far down one specific musical direction and instead allowing them to develop their heady lyricism….”

    The Golden Rule: don’t tell us how great you are. Tell us how interesting you are.

  9. Also check out this fascinating 2011 piece on the NPR website about a notorious press release for Delicate Steve deliberately written by Chuck Klosterman without actually talking to the band or listening to the music: The most telling quote from Frannie Kelley‘s article is “One of the reasons Klosterman was able to pull this off in the first place is that we NEED stories about music, and those stories really do change how we hear the music.” Pretty much my whole point in a nutshell.

  10. Well I would proffer that COCONUT DUMP are boasting about how great they are.

    Mine is:
    Lucid Diverse Original Prolific Aesthetic, Renaissance man or Jack of nowt, jury’s out you decide. This is my biog, it’s all in there between the lines…

    Or I could say, he’s a multi-instrumentalist, singer/songwriter/producer, programmer, engineer, he also writes childrens storys & scripts, films and edits his own videos, he also sculpts, paints, animates and is a free thinker, a graffiti artist even and all self-taught at that, even so, with all that talent you’d think you would’ve ‘eard of him eh? So it must be just my blurb/opinion eh?

  11. Hmmm, so COCONUT DUMP is actually a BAD biog, oh well I need to get some reading specs.

    Glad that one line is ok though, I got that one right at least.

    I’m making wee ripples on Instagram at the mo’, musos shouldn’t overlook this platform, from wee ripples mighty oceans grow, er, posibly.

  12. I feel like I’m overhyping myself though ?

    “TheKunig’s music is a wide-ranging, musically exploratory and sonically eclectic bundle of joy that takes in everything from hazy dream-prog to slick and soulful west-coast jazz-pop to straight down the line clubland bangers…as I believe the kids say.”

    “come for the chilled dance tune, stay for the mind-blowing eclecticism”

  13. Kim Ralls

    Hmm, so you’re saying I shouldn’t mention my addiction to wine gums? 😁

    Nah, seriously this is a big help – if a little depressing when I realised just how many of those flaws and cliches I’ve been guilty of…

    … oops 😱

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